Reid family - chapter 1 - 5

December 8th, 2009, 4:41 pm

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Reply meago, December 8th, 2009, 4:41 pm

and do you remember, when you're remember? lol
quite silly page XD

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Reply Acorn (Guest), December 8th, 2009, 7:08 pm

Translation Help :) Bob: Heh, of course. (you can add "Absolutely" at the end of it if you want)
Bob: I gave this to Emily a couple of years ago
Bob: How could I forget about it?
Mina: What else do you remember?
Emily: Do you remember how we got to know each other?
Bob: Sure I do
Bob: I even remember how we first met
Emily: Really? I forget what happened (or) Really? I forget some of the details

Aww, it's cute to see more about their family. Still good! :3

Reply Abocreature, December 10th, 2009, 8:58 pm

Tensing error Saying "forget" in the situation of "I forget what happened" is incorrect. "Forget" is present tense, as in "I tend to forget things". "Forgot" would be past tense. Since she is talking about the past, that would be used instead.

Other than that, pretty good. English is a ridiculously complicated language. I'm glad I was born into it.

Reply Kay (Guest), January 14th, 2010, 6:29 am

Year mistake. Lovely comic by the way! Really enjoying it so far! I did notice a mistake.
Bob says: "I gave this to Emily a couple of years ago."
But if he gave it to Emily when they were 18 a couple years is only 2. Might be better to say "I gave this to Emily many years ago" or maybe, " I gave this to Emily back in Highschool" :)
Keep up the great work!

Reply Ai Ataru, March 30th, 2010, 6:10 pm

But his smile still makes me smile,and is still the same [:
Go bob~

Reply CO (Guest), May 29th, 2010, 11:13 pm

@Kay I don't think it really makes that much of a difference. A "couple" isn't always two.

Reply Cara (Guest), June 4th, 2010, 7:28 am

@ CO "A couple" literally means, "a pair". It's certainly not nearly 20! It confused me too when I read it. XD

Reply Profanity00, June 12th, 2010, 9:33 pm

I like his shirt lol.

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