Reid family - chapter 1 - 8

December 9th, 2009, 4:54 pm

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Reply meago, December 9th, 2009, 5:08 pm

Another page ^^

blah, don't look at the perspective, i hate it @___@

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Reply Striped Orange Socks, December 9th, 2009, 5:14 pm

"Oooooh, this is so cuuuuute! D:>" Is what I honestly said aloud. Can't wait for more, ffff.

Reply SStefan, December 9th, 2009, 6:10 pm

Ca³kiem fajna nauczycielka, a gostek z kubkiem (podejrzewam, ¿e nauczyciel) wygl±da jak Bob dzi¶ (tzn. w czasach Meago Sagi) :3

Reply beasthunt, December 10th, 2009, 12:20 pm

mam nadzieje ze pan z kubkiem to nie ebdzie do aktu pozowac XD;

Reply Marcianek (Guest), December 10th, 2009, 12:23 pm

slodkie =3 Nauczycielka jest przeurocza <3

Reply Abocreature, December 10th, 2009, 9:07 pm

Ok, lots of English errors on this one.
"Look for him at Miss (Ms. would be fine, for future reference.) MacMale's. I've seen them together lately"
"Seriously? Ok, I will check, thanks!(slightly awkward sentence. Try "I will check there, thanks!" or something to that effect)"
"I have to hurry! See you tomorrow! Bye!"
"MacMale... MacMale... Hmm... I guess she's the one from the drawing classes or... something like that..."
"Aha, bingo!"
"Alright ladies."
The last frame you need to completely rewrite. I don't understand what she is telling them to do.

Reply HikariNinjaX (Guest), December 10th, 2009, 9:36 pm

page 8 I think the last frame would translate like this:
"Place the elements for a still life picture. I ask you to place more than one bottle"

The comic is looking great this far. n_n

Reply meago, December 11th, 2009, 3:22 am

thanks guys ;u;

Reply Acorn (Guest), January 2nd, 2010, 12:12 am

On the last frame, for a more natural sentence you can use:

"But make sure to use more than one bottle!"

Because I imagine that's what she's asking them to do? Use more than one object?

Reply MadyPPalwaysbesty, March 7th, 2010, 4:41 pm

AHem.. You DO realize that life drawing is when you draw naked people? (I would know :P)

Reply ST. (Guest), April 21st, 2010, 11:09 am

@ MadyPPalwaysBesty
It says still life :P

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