Reid family - chapter 1 - 9

December 10th, 2009, 1:10 pm

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Reply meago, December 10th, 2009, 1:19 pm

note: prof Laubert is a geography teacher.

don't ask me if he and miss Macmale having romance, i don't know XD

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Reply SStefan, December 10th, 2009, 3:55 pm

Wiesz co, niekoniecznie musz± mieæ romans, tego typu dialogi ('czaruj±ca pani', 'przemi³y pan', 'mi³o spêdzaæ czas', etc) s± do¶æ normalne pomiêdzy lubi±cymi siê/przyja¼ni±cymi/¿yczliwymi sobie nauczycielami czy wyk³adowcami.
Bardzo fajna perspektywa w trzecim kadrze :D

Reply Abocreature, December 10th, 2009, 9:12 pm

This page was pretty good as far as grammar goes.
Just as a note - check your helping verbs (you seem to have some trouble with "the" sometimes). They are annoying SoB's, but you gotta use them.
I hope I don't sound nit picky, but in the Author's Commentsm "having romance" should be "going out" or something to that effect.

Reply hikariNinjaX (Guest), December 10th, 2009, 9:41 pm

page 9 To Abocreature: it would actually be "are having a romance" xP
To Meago: Nice page, and I think Bob and his teacher look very much alike

Reply gee (Guest), December 20th, 2009, 6:19 am

practice, nie practise :)

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