Reid family - chapter 2 - 38

09 Jan 2010 09:56 am

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Reply meago, 09 Jan 2010 10:00 am

38th~ yay x3

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Reply meago, 09 Jan 2010 01:27 pm

repliezz @HaKu10
-thankies ^^
of course u dont, thank you for helping me ^^

@FredRock
-thank you :D
hmm in the first panel, i'm trying to say that he's serious in what he said

@Marcianek
-Kurde faktycznie troche podobna XDDDD
ale to nie ona, nie zgadza sie przedzial wiekowy, i Bobek ja poznaje dopiero za kilka lat :P

User's Comments:

Reply Cassey (Guest), 09 Jan 2010 10:26 am

I love this!! But it's this not his..

Reply Kitsii (Guest), 09 Jan 2010 10:28 am

Heey its Kitsii from DA I love your comicss !!!

Reply HaKu10, 09 Jan 2010 11:00 am

There is one mistake in the last panel.
"perticipating" should be participating. Hope it helps! ^^
Also, in the first panel, should Bob be saying, "honestly" instead of "earnestly?" Just wondering, I hope I don't sound rude. ^^;

Reply FredRock (Guest), 09 Jan 2010 12:14 pm

In the second panel, it should be "set out for at least three years" or I would even do "I wouldn't leave for at least three years, anyways."

I don't know what you're trying to say in the first panel, unfortunately. "Earnestly" means that he's doing something very eagerly, and it isn't usually used as an adverb. Someone or something can be earnest, and that's the most common usage. Could you mean that he "honestly" means it, like it's the truth?

And the last panel should be "participating" and you left out the "t" in "this."

I hope I helped. English is a really odd language sometimes. Heck, I can't even get everythign right all the time and I'm a native speaker. lol.

Reply Marcianek (Guest), 09 Jan 2010 12:17 pm

RINA!~~ 8D

Reply paradoxataur (Guest), 09 Jan 2010 02:30 pm

If you're trying to say that he means what he's saying, perhaps go with "Hey, I really mean it!" or, "Hey, I'm serious!" or something like that?

Also noticed in the second panel, instead of "consuilt" it should be "consult." An extra "i" managed to jump in there somehow. ;)
EDIT: "consult it" doesn't exactly make sense here, either... Depending on his relationship with his father, if they're close or not, perhaps a better choice would be to simply "consult with Father about it," or to "talk it over with Father." ...y'know, even as a native English-speaker, I feel like I got the first of those wrong somehow...

Reply Marcianek (Guest), 09 Jan 2010 03:04 pm

£aaa a my¶la³am xD bo nawet ta aura "happy-and-energetic-and-crazy-girl-ohohohoh-look-at-my-new-shoes-lol-smile" jak± roztacza jest podobna, tylko brakowa³o mi tych w³osów-¶widerków XD

Reply Leeland, 09 Jan 2010 06:11 pm

Ah! This is so awesome! I saw your work on DevArt and really liked it, and suddenly I found myself here! Incredible job!

Reply Guest, 09 Jan 2010 06:13 pm

Saying he has to "consult with his father about it" sounds odd and a little awkward, as that's a more old-fashioned (very old-fashioned) and formal way to say it.
It would probably sound less awkward to say "I have to talk with my dad about it" or "I just need to talk it over with Dad" or something like that.

Hope that helps, and I hope I don't sound rude ^^"

Reply Too lazy to log in. (Guest), 09 Jan 2010 06:25 pm

I found out about this wonderful comic from your Deviantart page, and I must say, I'm definitely going to be following this comic for as long as it lasts! The artwork is amazing, and for once on SJ, this has a nicely paced and interesting story plot.

Can't wait for the next page!

Reply ceschiii (Guest), 09 Jan 2010 07:35 pm

i'm absolutely in love with this story so far! keep up the good work!! :]]]

Reply Mojojo-jo@dA (Guest), 09 Jan 2010 07:43 pm

:D I really love this so far! Can't wait to continue! Found this on your dA page!

Reply :) (Guest), 09 Jan 2010 08:18 pm

love this comic! your style is adorable~

Reply jonathan (Guest), 09 Jan 2010 10:05 pm

Cool I LOVE YOUR ART
O)O
u

Reply emyray (Guest), 09 Jan 2010 10:08 pm

WOW! This is so good so far! Please keep going I'm so excited!

Reply Hakashi, 10 Jan 2010 03:31 am

Awww, Bob jest taki przeuroczy <333.

Reply IcePanther (Guest), 10 Jan 2010 04:23 am

Great Keep up the excellent work!

The drawing and inking/shading styles look very professional, and the story has aroused my interest immediately, as did your other story (the one with the demon boy).
Also, I like your drawing style very much (saw your art on DA frontpage from time to time, and must say, I was impressed).

Congrats, and keep it up :)

Reply Ryuu Kiba (Guest), 10 Jan 2010 06:28 pm

OMG The comic is great and neatly made but... am I the only one who noticed that Emy must have been 18 when she had Mina if she is 36 in the first pages of this? ._. omg... that means this comic is exactly on the timeline of "whatever" happened ._.

Reply anitasmiles (Guest), 10 Jan 2010 06:40 pm

Cute! I look forward to seeing more, Meago. :D

Reply waqarwru (Guest), 10 Jan 2010 08:23 pm

i want more I NEEED MOREEE!!!!!!!! :'(

Reply IchigoOnigiri, 11 Jan 2010 02:55 am

Yay!! Yay!! I Want MORE!!

Reply Daiya, 11 Jan 2010 06:12 am

@Kiba
You're right, come to think about it. I guess that's one of them reeeally fast developing relationships :)

Reply meago, 11 Jan 2010 09:38 am

@ Kiba, Daiya

- right X3
all was happen in about half year, but now when i'm thinking about this i wish i can change the timeline a little, to get more time for story, but it's too late, cause it would collide with my other comic (where Bob and Emi also appearing) XD
oh well~

Reply opa-chan (Guest), 15 May 2010 01:51 pm

you art very good

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