Reid family - chapter 2 - 38

January 9th, 2010, 9:56 am

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Reply meago, January 9th, 2010, 10:00 am

38th~ yay x3

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Reply meago, January 9th, 2010, 1:27 pm

repliezz @HaKu10
-thankies ^^
of course u dont, thank you for helping me ^^

@FredRock
-thank you :D
hmm in the first panel, i'm trying to say that he's serious in what he said

@Marcianek
-Kurde faktycznie troche podobna XDDDD
ale to nie ona, nie zgadza sie przedzial wiekowy, i Bobek ja poznaje dopiero za kilka lat :P

User's Comments:

Reply Cassey (Guest), January 9th, 2010, 10:26 am

I love this!! But it's this not his..

Reply Kitsii (Guest), January 9th, 2010, 10:28 am

Heey its Kitsii from DA I love your comicss !!!

Reply HaKu10, January 9th, 2010, 11:00 am

There is one mistake in the last panel.
"perticipating" should be participating. Hope it helps! ^^
Also, in the first panel, should Bob be saying, "honestly" instead of "earnestly?" Just wondering, I hope I don't sound rude. ^^;

Reply FredRock (Guest), January 9th, 2010, 12:14 pm

In the second panel, it should be "set out for at least three years" or I would even do "I wouldn't leave for at least three years, anyways."

I don't know what you're trying to say in the first panel, unfortunately. "Earnestly" means that he's doing something very eagerly, and it isn't usually used as an adverb. Someone or something can be earnest, and that's the most common usage. Could you mean that he "honestly" means it, like it's the truth?

And the last panel should be "participating" and you left out the "t" in "this."

I hope I helped. English is a really odd language sometimes. Heck, I can't even get everythign right all the time and I'm a native speaker. lol.

Reply Marcianek (Guest), January 9th, 2010, 12:17 pm

RINA!~~ 8D

Reply paradoxataur (Guest), January 9th, 2010, 2:30 pm

If you're trying to say that he means what he's saying, perhaps go with "Hey, I really mean it!" or, "Hey, I'm serious!" or something like that?

Also noticed in the second panel, instead of "consuilt" it should be "consult." An extra "i" managed to jump in there somehow. ;)
EDIT: "consult it" doesn't exactly make sense here, either... Depending on his relationship with his father, if they're close or not, perhaps a better choice would be to simply "consult with Father about it," or to "talk it over with Father." ...y'know, even as a native English-speaker, I feel like I got the first of those wrong somehow...

Reply Marcianek (Guest), January 9th, 2010, 3:04 pm

£aaa a my¶la³am xD bo nawet ta aura "happy-and-energetic-and-crazy-girl-ohohohoh-look-at-my-new-shoes-lol-smile" jak± roztacza jest podobna, tylko brakowa³o mi tych w³osów-¶widerków XD

Reply Leeland, January 9th, 2010, 6:11 pm

Ah! This is so awesome! I saw your work on DevArt and really liked it, and suddenly I found myself here! Incredible job!

Reply Guest, January 9th, 2010, 6:13 pm

Saying he has to "consult with his father about it" sounds odd and a little awkward, as that's a more old-fashioned (very old-fashioned) and formal way to say it.
It would probably sound less awkward to say "I have to talk with my dad about it" or "I just need to talk it over with Dad" or something like that.

Hope that helps, and I hope I don't sound rude ^^"

Reply Too lazy to log in. (Guest), January 9th, 2010, 6:25 pm

I found out about this wonderful comic from your Deviantart page, and I must say, I'm definitely going to be following this comic for as long as it lasts! The artwork is amazing, and for once on SJ, this has a nicely paced and interesting story plot.

Can't wait for the next page!

Reply ceschiii (Guest), January 9th, 2010, 7:35 pm

i'm absolutely in love with this story so far! keep up the good work!! :]]]

Reply Mojojo-jo@dA (Guest), January 9th, 2010, 7:43 pm

:D I really love this so far! Can't wait to continue! Found this on your dA page!

Reply :) (Guest), January 9th, 2010, 8:18 pm

love this comic! your style is adorable~

Reply jonathan (Guest), January 9th, 2010, 10:05 pm

Cool I LOVE YOUR ART
O)O
u

Reply emyray (Guest), January 9th, 2010, 10:08 pm

WOW! This is so good so far! Please keep going I'm so excited!

Reply Hakashi, January 10th, 2010, 3:31 am

Awww, Bob jest taki przeuroczy <333.

Reply IcePanther (Guest), January 10th, 2010, 4:23 am

Great Keep up the excellent work!

The drawing and inking/shading styles look very professional, and the story has aroused my interest immediately, as did your other story (the one with the demon boy).
Also, I like your drawing style very much (saw your art on DA frontpage from time to time, and must say, I was impressed).

Congrats, and keep it up :)

Reply Ryuu Kiba (Guest), January 10th, 2010, 6:28 pm

OMG The comic is great and neatly made but... am I the only one who noticed that Emy must have been 18 when she had Mina if she is 36 in the first pages of this? ._. omg... that means this comic is exactly on the timeline of "whatever" happened ._.

Reply anitasmiles (Guest), January 10th, 2010, 6:40 pm

Cute! I look forward to seeing more, Meago. :D

Reply waqarwru (Guest), January 10th, 2010, 8:23 pm

i want more I NEEED MOREEE!!!!!!!! :'(

Reply IchigoOnigiri, January 11th, 2010, 2:55 am

Yay!! Yay!! I Want MORE!!

Reply Daiya, January 11th, 2010, 6:12 am

@Kiba
You're right, come to think about it. I guess that's one of them reeeally fast developing relationships :)

Reply meago, January 11th, 2010, 9:38 am

@ Kiba, Daiya

- right X3
all was happen in about half year, but now when i'm thinking about this i wish i can change the timeline a little, to get more time for story, but it's too late, cause it would collide with my other comic (where Bob and Emi also appearing) XD
oh well~

Reply opa-chan (Guest), May 15th, 2010, 1:51 pm

you art very good

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