Reid family - chapter 3 - 90

May 24th, 2010, 8:41 am

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Reply meago, May 24th, 2010, 8:44 am

Help with mistakes in english plz! ;3;
(yesh, this time i did it by myself XD omg)

I started drawing comic in other way (the quality things)
I hope it looks better than before... (or worse? XD ) let me know

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Reply SolaratheHedgehog, May 24th, 2010, 9:13 am

Your English is pretty good, so don't fret ^^

Reply meago, May 24th, 2010, 9:30 am

Thanks guys ^^ omg Ime i see Astir 8D <3

Reply Sapphiress, May 24th, 2010, 9:31 am

Ahh. You did pretty good with the English but here are the two mistakes I caught.
"What did she do to you?"
"I thought we were done with that yogurt"

Can't wait to see what happens next! C:

Reply Water_lily, May 24th, 2010, 10:45 am

Yeah, new pages =3 !

I think the quality is pretty good here (= !

Reply icius, May 24th, 2010, 12:30 pm

I think the English is good. The only small thing I might change would be to switch "Ah!and take this toilet..." to "Oh, and take this toilet..." Just sounds more natural to me.

The quality looks very nice, just curious what are you doing differently? What is the "other way" ?

Reply diao-chan, May 24th, 2010, 12:36 pm

go to hell, stupid bitches! D: (sorry for the bad word ^^U)

yayy more pages! :D I like te quality better now ^3^)b

Reply Crowlin, May 24th, 2010, 3:44 pm

The comic looks awesome, Meago. And the English is perfectly fine, but I'd be happy to help on future pages if you have any questions. ;D

I agree, the bishes need to be...*insert punishment*

Reply Hershey-Morning, May 24th, 2010, 4:33 pm

I didn't even notice D:

Reply zosiacchi, May 24th, 2010, 4:37 pm

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Reply Paiige (Guest), May 24th, 2010, 5:11 pm

yeah more pages! and i don't see anything wrong with your English...

Reply krickett, May 24th, 2010, 8:19 pm

D< they will pay

Reply Zeon_Two_Six, May 24th, 2010, 9:57 pm

Need to have those pricks 'eradicated'? >XD

Reply Naigel (Guest), May 25th, 2010, 2:01 am

Damn, those girls are MEAN.

The quality looks good! I have to be honest; I don't really see a difference...

I am glad that you updated :D Thank you.

Reply meago, May 25th, 2010, 7:16 am

So the quality thing is that i used other brush size, and make less grain on the greys LOL XD
haha but yeah, almost no difference XD;

Reply DIDLD (Guest), May 25th, 2010, 7:58 am

Ooh!<3 I have waited for the extension really long, and so i was so haapppyyyyyy when you post the new number to here (sorry my bad english ;__;)!<3 I hope you can post again more yummi number here, because i just can't wait!

And i don't see mistakes! :D Äh, stupid bitches are again bullying Emily! Murr :<

I hope you post more and quick!<3 (:

Reply bhudicae (Guest), May 25th, 2010, 9:32 am

mean gurls suk Yay! A new page!! I think the new version looks great! Very subtle changes...and geez can we get rid of the mean girls plz! (rubs her head in sympathy) Soap hurts!
(but not MY soap...MY soap is sweet and gentle and would never hurt anybody!

Reply Zef (Guest), May 25th, 2010, 11:18 am

Lol, roz¶mieszy³ mnie ten papier. Z g³ówki za dyszkê, hehe. ;)

Reply Andie (Guest), May 25th, 2010, 12:17 pm

Great! Your English is crystal clear! Great job! And the page looks magnificent :) :D

Reply delight-chring, May 25th, 2010, 3:39 pm

i hate those girls D8<
i think this page looks pretty great =D

Reply Rureey, May 25th, 2010, 6:09 pm

Well, at least they're honest.

Reply XxAnimanga22xX (Guest), February 13th, 2011, 3:21 pm


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